From cc06e91c257da3b526dd0c72b18455eb765dab74 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sam Kent <32453267+microbit-sam@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 18 Jun 2019 19:23:37 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Update write-received-packet-to-serial.md (#2217)

A support ticket pointed out issues that they'd encountered when trying to follow this document:

- `sendValue` only supports an 8 character string. This is documented in the `sendValue` docs but a longer string had been used here
- Only `radio.onReceivedNumber` is used so the sample output is not consistent with the users experience. I've changed it so that all packets are handled
---
 .../radio/write-received-packet-to-serial.md  | 26 +++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/reference/radio/write-received-packet-to-serial.md b/docs/reference/radio/write-received-packet-to-serial.md
index 8d06fe8b..26fc44b6 100644
--- a/docs/reference/radio/write-received-packet-to-serial.md
+++ b/docs/reference/radio/write-received-packet-to-serial.md
@@ -30,22 +30,26 @@ the second @boardname@), this program sends temperature data to the
 serial port.
 
 ```blocks
-input.onButtonPressed(Button.A, () => {
-    radio.sendNumber(input.temperature());
-    radio.sendValue("temperature", input.temperature());
-    radio.sendString("It's warm now");
-
-
-});
+input.onButtonPressed(Button.A, function () {
+    radio.sendNumber(input.temperature())
+    radio.sendValue("temp", input.temperature())
+    radio.sendString("It's warm now")
+})
 radio.onReceivedNumber(function (receivedNumber) {
-    radio.writeReceivedPacketToSerial();
-});
+    radio.writeReceivedPacketToSerial()
+})
+radio.onReceivedValue(function (name, value) {
+    radio.writeReceivedPacketToSerial()
+})
+radio.onReceivedString(function (receivedString) {
+    radio.writeReceivedPacketToSerial()
+})
 ```
 Sample output to serial when ``A`` button pressed:
 
 ```json
 {"t":323,"s":0,"v":27}
-{"t":325,"s":0,"n":"temperature","v":27}
+{"t":325,"s":0,"n":"temp","v":27}
 {"t":326,"s":0,"n":"It's warm now"}
 ```
 
@@ -59,4 +63,4 @@ Sample output to serial when ``A`` button pressed:
 
 ```package
 radio
-```
\ No newline at end of file
+```