From e27232667dcd28816b3bd49777db53185fc3bed2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Galen Nickel <v-ganick@microsoft.com>
Date: Mon, 10 Sep 2018 15:46:24 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Edit the 'dice' project slightly (#1202)

---
 docs/projects/dice.md | 9 ++++-----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/projects/dice.md b/docs/projects/dice.md
index 37ded4d1..e6aec085 100644
--- a/docs/projects/dice.md
+++ b/docs/projects/dice.md
@@ -4,12 +4,11 @@
 
 ![A microbit dice](/static/mb/projects/dice.png)
 
-Let's turn the @boardname@ into a dice! To do so, we need 3 pieces of code: detect a throw (shake),
-pick a random number, show the number.
+Let's turn the @boardname@ into a dice! To do this, we need 3 pieces of code: one to detect a throw (shake), another to pick a random number, and then one to show the number.
 
 ## Step 1 @fullscreen
 
-Place the ``||input:on shake||`` block. It runs code when you shake the @boardname@.
+Place the ``||input:on shake||`` block onto the editor workspace. It runs code when you shake the @boardname@.
 
 ```blocks
 input.onGesture(Gesture.Shake, () => {
@@ -19,7 +18,7 @@ input.onGesture(Gesture.Shake, () => {
 
 ## Step 2 @fullscreen
 
-Place the ``||basic:show number||`` block in the ``||input:on shake||`` block to display a number.
+Get a ``||basic:show number||`` block and place it inside the ``||input:on shake||`` block to display a number.
 
 ```blocks
 input.onGesture(Gesture.Shake, () => {
@@ -29,7 +28,7 @@ input.onGesture(Gesture.Shake, () => {
 
 ## Step 3 @fullscreen
 
-Place the ``||Math:pick random||`` block in an ``||input:on shake||`` block to pick a random number.
+Put a ``||Math:pick random||`` block in the ``||basic:show number||`` block to pick a random number.
 
 ```blocks
 input.onGesture(Gesture.Shake, () => {