diff --git a/docs/projects/light-monster.md b/docs/projects/light-monster.md
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@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
 # Light Monster
 
-## @description A monster made of cardboard that responds to light
+## @description A monster made of coffee cup holders that responds to light
 
 ## ~avatar avatar
 
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ https://youtu.be/BiZLjugXMbM
 
 ## Materials
 
-* 3 Coffee cup holders
-* 2 Coffee cup strirer wood sticks
+* 3 Coffee cup holders (hot cup sleeves)
+* 2 Wood coffee strirer sticks
 * Glue gun
 * Scissors that can cut cardboard
 * 1 @boardname@, battery holder and 2 AAA batteries
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ https://youtu.be/BiZLjugXMbM
 
 ## Preparation
 
-* [Equip the microservo with crocodile clips](/device/servo)
+* [Setup the microservo with crocodile clips](/device/servo)
 
 ## Activities
 
diff --git a/docs/projects/light-monster/code.md b/docs/projects/light-monster/code.md
index 931a6681..07a0c7d9 100644
--- a/docs/projects/light-monster/code.md
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@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 # Code
-## @description code to make the coffee cup monster alive
+
+## @description Code to make the light monster come alive
 
 ## ~avatar avatar
 
@@ -9,8 +10,7 @@ Add code to open the mouth when light is detected.
 
 ## Duration: ~30 minutes
 
-We are going to add code to open the mouth proportionally to the amount of light on the @boardname@.
-In a loop, we will read the light and map it to an angle using the ``pins.map`` function.
+We are going to add code to open the mouth proportionally to the amount of light on the @boardname@. The code is in a loop so we'll continually read the light level and map it to an angle using the ``||pins:map||`` function.
 
 ```blocks
 basic.forever(() => {
diff --git a/docs/projects/light-monster/connect.md b/docs/projects/light-monster/connect.md
index 9fec60d3..5e67d23f 100644
--- a/docs/projects/light-monster/connect.md
+++ b/docs/projects/light-monster/connect.md
@@ -2,15 +2,13 @@
 
 ## ~avatar avatar
 
-Remote control your monster with another @boardname@
+Remote control your monster with another @boardname@.
 
 ## ~
 
 ## Duration: ~30 minutes
 
-You will need 2 @boardname@ for this part. By using the radio, we can make the inchworm controlled by another @boardname@.
-Download the code below to the @boardname@ on the inchworm and another "controller" @boardname@. 
-Whenere A is pressed, the monster will open and close it's mouth will move once.
+You will need one more @boardname@ for this part. By using the radio, we can control the monster with another @boardname@. Download the code below to the @boardname@ on the monster and then again onto a "controller" @boardname@. Whenever button **A** is pressed, the monster's mouth moves once.
 
 ```blocks
 radio.onDataPacketReceived(({receivedNumber}) => {
diff --git a/docs/projects/light-monster/make.md b/docs/projects/light-monster/make.md
index 7dac166a..695a565e 100644
--- a/docs/projects/light-monster/make.md
+++ b/docs/projects/light-monster/make.md
@@ -1,25 +1,27 @@
 # Make
+
 ## @description Building the light monster
 
 ## ~avatar avatar
 
-Turn a piece of coffee holders into a monster!
+Turn some coffee cup holders into a monster that moves to light!
 
 ## ~
 
 ## Duration: ~60 minutes
 
 ## Materials
-  * 3 Coffee cup holders
-  * 2 Coffee cup strirer wood sticks
-  * Scissors
-  * glue gun or tape
-  * 1 paper clip
 
-## Step 1: cardboard
+* 3 coffee cup holders (hot cup sleeves)
+* 2 ood coffee strirer sticks
+* scissors
+* glue gun or tape
+* 1 paper clip
+
+## Step 1: Glue the cup holders and sticks together
 
 TODO
 
-## ~button /projects/coffee-cup-monster/code
+## ~button /projects/light-monster/code
 NEXT: Code
 ## ~
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