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		@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ Go to http://ncase.me/fireflies/ and read about the fireflies synchronization ph
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## Code
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The goal of this project is to create virtual fireflies using @boardname@ that mimic the real fireflies. 
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After reading the article, there are a few sentences that stand out to help.
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We want to create virtual fireflies using multiple @boardname@ (each @boardname@ acts as a firefly).
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Let's review some of the key points of the article:
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### "Each firefly has its own individual internal clock"
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### "and every time the clock “strikes twelve”, it flashes."
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So we need a [forever](/reference/basic/forever) loop to increment the clock.
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When the clock reaches "noon" (let's pick 8), we turn on the screen breifly.
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We can use a [forever](/reference/basic/forever) loop to repeat code that increments the clock.
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When the clock reaches "noon" (let's pick `8`), we turn on the screen breifly (by using the game score animation)
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```block
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// the clock ticker
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### Step 1: when you see a nearby firefly flash, nudge your clock a little bit forward.
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We will use radio messages to simulate the vision of fireflies. 
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The @boardname@ can send radio messages to neibhor @boardname@.
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We can use these messages to simulate the "flashes" of light. 
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* When a firefly flashes, it also sends a number over radio using [radio send number](/reference/radio/send-number).
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https://youtu.be/XzZeB4yYnEw
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Download this program on as many @boardname@ as you can find and try it out in a dark room!
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Now that we have all the parts needed to build our firefly simulator, we can assemble it into a program.
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We've add a [radio set group](/reference/radio/set-group) block to specify which group the firefly will communicate on. Download this program on as many @boardname@ as you can find and try it out in a dark room!
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(We've added a [radio set group](/reference/radio/set-group) block to specify which group the firefly will communicate on). 
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```blocks
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// the clock ticker
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